Welcome potential Beta Reader

Thank you for your interest in serving as a Beta Reader for my latest novel, Craving Revenge: A Matt Tremain Technothriller, book 2, the sequel to The CleanSweep Conspiracy: A Matt Tremain Technothriller, book 1.

In this latest fast-paced story, Matt Tremain and his friend, Detective Carling, who were instrumental in exposing the evil and moral corruption behind a diabolical plan in Book 1, face their nemesis once again. Now the architect of that plan is using all his resources to get even, fueled by hatred and a desire for revenge.

Little does Matt know that he and his friends will be drawn into global intrigue, revealing a conspiracy much wider than first believed.


I will use your honest and critical feedback, which I’ll use to guide the final revision prior to publication. As a thank you, all selected beta readers will receive a free digital or PDF copy of the manuscript. Below you can review my questions*

All who meet the deadline will be credited by name in the acknowledgments section of the final published book.

Thank you for your interest and support.

Wait, there’s more! Each beta ready will also get a free copy of book 1.

And still more! The name of my beta readers will be entered into a drawing for a $25 Amazon gift card.

Good reading.



* The anticipated date is fluid. At this writing, the manuscript should be ready for your reading by April 15, timed to help you forget about taxes.




I only want to hear the flawed. Well, that may not be entirely accurate, but it will be your most significant contribution.


  1. Where did you find any weaknesses?
  2. Was there any plot confusion?
  3. Did the story line hang together?
  4. Did you want to stop reading at any point in the story?
  5. Was there enough action?
  6. Was the dialogue natural?


These six questions are important to me. If you have other criticisms, please hurl them at me as well. I can be thick-skinned, and you will be a part of making the story be the best it can be.


But If you feel the urge to say some nice things about the story, please do.